Meow (Etheree) slight rewrite
MEOW Catis fator quite slimif trim of limbFur multi-colouredOr a solid colour,Playing or preying verminAnd does not listen to sermonsby humans they truly think they ownWhen they are indoors, or out on...
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Wow SuSanne, you're on a roll... I love this. Not familiar with this form but makes me want to have a go at it.Regards,Maryse
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SuSanne, You are on a roll. You go Girl! I do like that cat..(Smiling)I enjoyed the second Etheree..Auntie W.
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You might want to check the syllables on some of your lines Susanne but this is great content...a cool Etheree...love this form and you did good
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Hi Karen ~ my friend and I countedsyllables at work today and realized I was off but stand by for a slight rewrite to hopefully get syllables right I still consider you the expert on this board and...
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Maryse and Auntie W ~ please again see my replyto Karen and Wanda, so glad you like that 'cat'as I'm working on learning to expand my horizons So glad you both enjoyed and hoping you are bothbetter at...
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Hi SuSanne... I enjoyed the poem but have no idea of the rules... still have to check out that link!Regards,Maryse
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Well W.D. ~ As long as the liked it Thanks for the smile I got when I read this!!!Susanne
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I will have to check out the form.I am not very good at forms.I really liked your write.Sola
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Sola ~ I would not be surprised that thisis a form you could do well Regardless,I am so glad you like this one of mine!!!Thanks!!! SusanneA link for the...
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awwww.. this is sooooooooo cute, Susanne!We had the Etheree in the challenge forum this past fall. Everyone seemed to enjoy trying it.You did a great job on this (Might want to check your 5th line) :)...
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Alaura ~ thanks regarding the 5th line, I knew therewas something I missed and yes how I agree, they dolove to walk away from our sermons and so glad youenjoyed!!! Susanne
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